الجمعة، 17 ديسمبر 2010

the essay

MY DREAM JOB

              Every body has dream job. There are people who want to be adoctor , an engineer or to be areporter and so on . But I want to be afashion designer. To design alot of clothes , dresses , shoeses , glasses and accessorys. fashion designer is my live . I designed alot of things before in my imagination .So I want to learn how I can make adesign. This  job draw my attention because I like fashion , buying clothes and accessorys , making combination from things and watching fashion programmes . Fashion programmes learned my alot but I prefer to useing my imagination and creativity.
       
                    To top it off my study around English has abig role .Because if you want to be asuccessful designer you must keep in touch with the world outside,and this need one life and breathe English. Because English is the language of the world .This job has alot of benfits for me, I love travelling and this job will oblige me to travel alot .Also this job create creativity and the most important thing for me is to be famouse.
               So I can achieve my dreams through this job .to be afamouse person is good for me .If you art in street and people begane pointing at you ,you will feel good. Another dream is to gain alot of money by hard working. Because money can achieve any one's dream to have acar ,abig house .As we say money is talking. SO CROSS FINGER TO ME AND WISH GOOD LUCK FOR ME.
                   In the end I should mention that it's water under the bridge .In one hand , Our society take alot of rights from girls. If you are famouse so, you are bad .If you travel alone you are bad also . In other hand , the family they want the girl to marry and have children to bring they up . But it's my career and I want to apply every thing I wish . To conclude I should tell you that in one day Iwill achieve what Idreamed about. I will be afashion designer "I walk what I talk.

AN OUT LINE

MY DREAM JOB

          *INTRODUCTION:-
A- what's my dream job ?
B- why I choose this job?

* the body:-
(1)
A- What's the reflection of my study in my dream job?
B- What are the benfits of this job?
(2)
A- Can I achiev my dreams through this job ?
B- What I need to do to gety my dream job?
 *Conclusion:-
What are the deficulties which I will face in getting this job?

السبت، 20 نوفمبر 2010

Essay

The educational system in Egypt

         Every country has it's own style in education which reflects it's culture .The educational system is amirror to how much this country is successful .In Egypt we have avery bad educational system ,which effect badly in our students . Studies have shown that the Egyptian child is the most inteligent child in the world until 6 years . The age of  joining school so his inteligent began to decreased because of our educational system.
        There are alot of reasons to the bad educational system in egypt. On the one hand , there are the officials who controls this system .They change the system whatever they want and don't complete each other . When anew one come to be responsible, He changes the previous system and don't complete to the last one. On the other hand , there are teachers who don't apply the system well and the private lessons which decreased the role of the school .So we need to change our educational system to be fit with our students. officials must complete each other in this system from the minister to the teacher.
          one of the styles which we need to change is the theorrtical style in learning. We must use the practical one .An example on that when we teaching our students geographay we teach them theorys and that is the thing which make them hate this subject ,but if we take them to ajourney and explain every thing .They will understand this subject well .In addition to our educational system must qualifies our studentys to find ajop when they graduate.In contrast our system increase the unemployment.Beacuase joining university depends on the degree the student have and this is wrong .We must know the abilities of each student and what field we need in work.
             To conclude we must put some steps to develop our educational system .our educational system must be areflection of our society . We must know what are the society needs and what are the students need. Tieing them together to creat asuccessful educational system .Another step we must this system in the right way. Because the application is the important step for developing.

Out line

The educational system in Egypt

*The introduction:-
1- Does Egypt use asuccessful educational system?
2-How the educational system in Egypt effect on our student?

* The body:-
1-
A) What's the reasons for our bad educational system?
B)Do we need to change the educational system?
2-
A)Do we need to use adifferent style in our educational system?
B)How our educational system contribute to unemployment in egypt?
* The coclusion:-
-How can we develop our educational system?

الجمعة، 29 أكتوبر 2010

argumentative essay

((First draft))

           There are alot of people living in darkness because of using magic. Magic is the art that control or forecast natural  events or fores by invoking the supernatural.There are people who beilive that it is possible to break the laws of physics.But I don't beilive on using magic.People can't hurt each other or benefit each other without God's willing. If Alla want to hurt or benefit someone it will happened. So people who are think that they can hurt others they are wrong .Those people who beilive on these things this is because of their disbeliefing in Alla. 

             On one hand ,there are people who belive on magic. They believe that it is possible to make objects fly and move without touching them,to speak with dead people and to help or harm other people.So those people practice magic to revenge their enemies or because they envy their friends. Also they use magic to solve their problems.
              On the other hand, people who don't believe in magic . They have agreat faith in god. they belive that there aren't any body who can harm them or help them in solving their problems .They depend on alla .They pray to alla when they have aproblem because they beilive that this problem is trials from alla and he is the only one who can remove this calamity.
           
                  In conclusion, everybody should know that using magic contribute in delaying civilization. If all people beilive in magic they will stay on their places. Magic will become the only thing which concern our mind.So they beilive in darkness. Their day will depend on magic .They won't make frinds because they beilive in envy. People will hate eachother and will be away from alla. so they will live in darkness over their life

Argumentative essay

(( Out line ))

Introduction:
1) What is meant by magic?
2) My opinion in using magic.
3) Why I don't belive in magic?

Body:
1) People belive in magic.
      a)) why are people belive in magic?
      b)) Giving evidences and reasons on beliving in magic.
2) People don't belive in magic.
      a)) Why are people don't belive in magic?
      b)) Reasons and evidences of not beliving in magic.
conclusion:
1) Is magic causes delay of civilization?
2) Are people live in darkness because of magic?