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There are alot of people living in darkness because of using magic. Magic is the art that control or forecast natural events or fores by invoking the supernatural.There are people who beilive that it is possible to break the laws of physics.But I don't beilive on using magic.People can't hurt each other or benefit each other without God's willing. If Alla want to hurt or benefit someone it will happened. So people who are think that they can hurt others they are wrong .Those people who beilive on these things this is because of their disbeliefing in Alla.
On one hand ,there are people who belive on magic. They believe that it is possible to make objects fly and move without touching them,to speak with dead people and to help or harm other people.So those people practice magic to revenge their enemies or because they envy their friends. Also they use magic to solve their problems.
On the other hand, people who don't believe in magic . They have agreat faith in god. they belive that there aren't any body who can harm them or help them in solving their problems .They depend on alla .They pray to alla when they have aproblem because they beilive that this problem is trials from alla and he is the only one who can remove this calamity.
In conclusion, everybody should know that using magic contribute in delaying civilization. If all people beilive in magic they will stay on their places. Magic will become the only thing which concern our mind.So they beilive in darkness. Their day will depend on magic .They won't make frinds because they beilive in envy. People will hate eachother and will be away from alla. so they will live in darkness over their life.
Your topic is good and your essay is well organized.
ردحذفyour ideas are clear and understandable. there are some corrections that you need to do in your essay such as:
1. There are people who beilive (wrong spelling).
2. beilive on (believe in)
3.People can't (dont use abbreviated forms).
4.will happened (will happen)
5. So people who are think (are thinking)
6.hurt others they are wrong (hurt others, are wrong).
7. Those people who beilive on these things this is because of their disbeliefing in Alla (wrong structure, rewrite the sentence in a clear way.)
8. belive on magic (believe in )
9. agreat faith in god (God)
10. Allah should be capitalized.
11. using magic contribute(s) in delaying civilization